Okay, I’m officially done after the first half of this chapter. What is the point in warning her desperately to see the conversation but then have her do absolutely nothing about it? The poor youngest now has guilt she didn’t need, you have a bad edit, and who knows what else. MFC frankly deserves to not come out of this clean. The only way you get out of it is with plot armor which you already got to know about the issue.
I would have liked it better if she hasn’t known and dealt with it after the fact. Arg!! Goodbye all.
Okay, I’m officially done after the first half of this chapter. What is the point in warning her desperately to see the conversation but then have her do absolutely nothing about it? The poor youngest now has guilt she didn’t need, you have a bad edit, and who knows what else. MFC frankly deserves to not come out of this clean. The only way you get out of it is with plot armor which you already got to know about the issue.
I would have liked it better if she hasn’t known and dealt with it after the fact. Arg!! Goodbye all.