That’s my problem with stories like this 1st he was hired on, on the kings authority the prince should have no final say. 2nd how did he trick experts in the field doesnt make sense the prince in trash talking him trashed the highest class wizards in the country as well as his dad insinuating they could be bought like cheap wh*res with “connections.” This brings up the third point how does he have connections if he’s a poor orphan who can use only barrier magic? I also hate when people write their characters to be so pathetic he should have dismissed the prince and said “your father hired me only he can fire me let alone banish me from the country. You are still lack the maturity and understanding you’ll need to make these decisions much less carry the weight of your fathers crown, f*ck outta here.”
Toonymctoonface
17 May 9:28 AM
People are knocking this story saying this very powerful mage would command more respect with his level of power and could go to any country he wanted.
Firstly, he doesn’t want to go into another country he wants to stay where he is because it’s his home and he has family there.
Secondly, it’s very likely that you does not want to reveal how powerful he is. This would put his loved ones in danger and instead of having a relatively simple and safe safe life protecting the hero and his party his country would probably try to force him to actually fight wars for them. So it’s perfectly reasonable that he doesn’t give a big demonstration of his power in order to persuade the prince to let him stay in the party as that would no doubt lead to even worse problems.
Why is this loser even begging to stay if he can do all of that, literally any country on earth would grant him nobility.
That’s my problem with stories like this 1st he was hired on, on the kings authority the prince should have no final say. 2nd how did he trick experts in the field doesnt make sense the prince in trash talking him trashed the highest class wizards in the country as well as his dad insinuating they could be bought like cheap wh*res with “connections.” This brings up the third point how does he have connections if he’s a poor orphan who can use only barrier magic? I also hate when people write their characters to be so pathetic he should have dismissed the prince and said “your father hired me only he can fire me let alone banish me from the country. You are still lack the maturity and understanding you’ll need to make these decisions much less carry the weight of your fathers crown, f*ck outta here.”
People are knocking this story saying this very powerful mage would command more respect with his level of power and could go to any country he wanted.
Firstly, he doesn’t want to go into another country he wants to stay where he is because it’s his home and he has family there.
Secondly, it’s very likely that you does not want to reveal how powerful he is. This would put his loved ones in danger and instead of having a relatively simple and safe safe life protecting the hero and his party his country would probably try to force him to actually fight wars for them. So it’s perfectly reasonable that he doesn’t give a big demonstration of his power in order to persuade the prince to let him stay in the party as that would no doubt lead to even worse problems.