I had a feeling the story was going to be told this way (that’s why I’m hoping for a 4-5 chapter mass releaseđŸ˜…). The story itself is thoughtout and interesting, and I love the characters so far. However, the pacing is a bit of a debacle. They’re stretching out the chapters by flooding it with unnecessary narrative and monolog. Plus, they have frames that backtrack into info we already received in earlier chapters. For me, this type of filler is the second most obnoxious to read (the #1 shitiest filler is when the story is filled with eating scenes and walkabout conversations that go nowhere).
I had a feeling the story was going to be told this way (that’s why I’m hoping for a 4-5 chapter mass releaseđŸ˜…). The story itself is thoughtout and interesting, and I love the characters so far. However, the pacing is a bit of a debacle. They’re stretching out the chapters by flooding it with unnecessary narrative and monolog. Plus, they have frames that backtrack into info we already received in earlier chapters. For me, this type of filler is the second most obnoxious to read (the #1 shitiest filler is when the story is filled with eating scenes and walkabout conversations that go nowhere).